Not bad Munchy . . .

Your definately getting better, I see you've taken some of my advice and recorded a little farther away from the mic, very good, very good.

I also love the dancing girl at the beginning, that was geniously done mate! Other than that, just keep em coming, (oh and try not to make em all saturated with Bloads of colors, like that one scene where the one kid looked into the nasty room with the broom, that darkness level was almost perfect! If your colors were more like that, although not AS dark, it would be like Woah!! improvement!!!

Just try some of the things I suggested and see what comes of it! Great Job this time Munch, I fiffened it!!!

Very Nice

Not bad at all man, if anything it deserves atleast a 4 average score!

Very unique style there, and quite attentive story!

dont listen to that immature kid below me . . .

As you can see in his profile, he hasnt made any flash animations and has just recently joined Newgrounds.

I presonally liked the style and plan to see more from you!

Keep at it man!

-Bussman

Nice

Nice job man and thanks a lot!!!

Nice

Not bad man, i could tell a little wiggely while moving it but hey its better than i can doo

Good Job

ok

not the best i have seen, but still ok nice job, just keep up the good work and keep the ideas flowing dude

Indeed Very Very Nice

I love the choir in it (Kingdom of Heaven) its so dark/ music before some great epic battle, or maybe even some sort of like slow motion calvary charge with faces filled with fright and anger and all slow motion...

Those are just the images i get in my head when listening to it!

Love this style, keep at it man.

Brilliant

This is great for a firsty! Its soo different to the common techno beat. I gave you 8 for effort because I Know, that your way better than this; for this was just a warmup of Daniel Zimmerman!!!

Nice job Man!